Statement of the Problem
College students enrolled in composition courses
are expected to develop their academic writing
skills in order to survive in the university. One
of the first steps to meet this expectation is by
applying innovative pedagogical practices in the
process of discovery and invention. In this
regard, the promise of computer-mediated
communication (CMC) to facilitate student exchange
becomes an enabling practice (Blythe, 2003;
Yancey, 2003). Because the process of
collaborative online invention or prewriting is a
social act no longer reminiscent of the
Platonic/solitary view, it is necessary to examine
the usability of CMC as a social composing tool.
Toward this goal, this study closely re-examines
the effects of one of the most commonly used CMC
invention strategies in current composition
classrooms, the Discussion feature of Blackboard,
on an argumentative research-based essay
requirement. One computer-mediated first-year
writing class in an average-sized mid-western
university used asynchronous Discussion Board for
collaborative invention in the spring of 2007. The
transfer of invention ideas to student essays,
along with the attitudes and perceptions of the
teacher and students toward this online activity,
was analyzed and described to strengthen the
pedagogical implications of this type of
asynchronous technology among other CMC platforms
in composition studies. Though short-term
investigations on a limited setting such as this
may not yield generalizable results, this inquiry
can definitely contribute to understanding how
technology impacts the writing classroom.
Literature Survey
The field of computers and writing acknowledges
the special features of online communication to
link learners collaboratively and help them
develop their academic communication skills. In
this case, online invention creates a space where
ideas are formed, meanings are negotiated,
questions are asked, and language forms are
produced uninhibitedly, far removed from any
traditional, teacher-centered approach to
instruction. In fact, a growing number of research
studies have already identified its positive
effects on student learning (e.g. Barton, 2005;
Fife, 2008; Hewett, 2006; Paulus, 2007). The use
of Blackboard content-management tools has become
ubiquitous in the academic landscape and, with the
current boom of Web 2.0 and other interactive
media learning tools that brought practitioners to
greater lengths of classroom experimentation, many
writing teachers seem to have forgotten their
primary responsibility of validating the influence
of such tools on the quality of student writing.
Revisiting the Process of Invention and
Collaborative Learning
In order to provide opportunities for student
writers to develop academic language proficiency,
one should re-consider the role of invention in
the writing process. The process of invention
ideally allows students to come up with clear
essay topics and supporting details, wrestle and
make connections between academic texts, think and
communicate within the parameters of academic
jargon, and so forth. Student writers find
themselves moving freely between the personal and
the academic praxis before the drafting process.
Lauer (2004) argues that “All writers face the
problem of finding subjects to write about and of
developing these subjects” (p. 1). The idea that
the writer undergoes preliminary stages could be
traced back to cognitive psychology (Barab &
Duffy, 2000).
Consequently, since entering a social paradigmatic
approach (Paulus, 2007; Trupe, 2004), invention
becomes more privileged in the writing classroom
and the calls to study its practices gradually
abound. With the ubiquity of an interactive
classroom comes the success of the collaborative
method, proving that learning can go on without
the immediate presence of the teacher. Kelland
(2006) supports this by examining the development
of opportunities developed around constructivist
principles, including constructing knowledge,
practical participation, and collaborative work.
In fact, academic literacy skills such as
synthesizing sources, narrowing down topics,
focusing main ideas and supporting details, and so
forth become socially enhanced as students try to
construct knowledge. The idea that it is only
through interaction, dialogue, and negotiation of
meanings that lead to higher learning is tacit in
this respect.
But collaborative invention is just one among many
other practices that broaden the experience of the
writer; therefore, it is not at all impossible to
draw something positive from solitary prewriting.
However, once solitary invention becomes the
only activity for generating ideas, then the
prewriting experience also becomes limited.
The idea is to expand prewriting techniques that
would involve communication with others, if only
to make sure that the problem of inadequate
communicative skills within an academic discourse
community is mediated.
Embracing Computer-Mediated Communication
Current online practices, such as chat, blogs,
wikis, and so on, including the use of
asynchronous Discussion Board forums facilitate,
augment, and redefine group interaction as well as
promote the positive effects of collaborative
learning in academic discourse communities.
Translating solitary prewriting to a more social
online discussion provides more unique
opportunities for students to dabble in new
academic material as they interact with each other
before drafting their ideas on paper (Olaniran,
2005). The fact that more audience awareness may
result from such a cognitively demanding task is
extremely beneficial. Student writers are forced
to verbalize their thoughts and interact with one
another in online forums, allowing them to
practice/use the language of the academic
discourse community. Of course, the
non-threatening space of online communication
platforms enhances the advantages of collaborative
invention (Pennington, 2008; Rickly, 2004).
Hand & Prain (2002) argue that “any effective
writing-to-learn task requires a rich learning
environment where students are provided with
sufficient motivation, procedural guidance, and
expert and on-going peer feedback” (p. 753). As
noted earlier, engaging students in
computer-mediated invention supports such an
environment since the virtual activity itself
exhibits three collaborative characteristics:
motivation, guidance, and feedback. Anderson
(2006) agrees that online interactions become
beneficial for student learning, given the social
nature of the activity. But is this really the
case for all first-year writing students?
Does online invention trigger the development of
ideas transferable to student academic writing?
Research Questions
Apparently, more investigations on dialogic
artifact analysis are still needed in the field of
composition studies. Such examination will
strengthen the correlation between the use of CMC
and the quality of the written product, so that
composition teachers will be able to (1)
understand the value of distinct platforms as a
composing tool, and (2) choose an invention
strategy that renders purposeful collaborative
online activities within a situated context.
Because the use of the Discussion Board, an online
threaded content-management tool, is still one of
the most common collaborative online invention
forums, investigating its impact on first-year
student writing based on (1) the transfer of ideas
from online to print, and (2) the attitudes and
perceptions of the teacher and students toward the
process is beneficial for composition teachers.
The term “collaborative online invention” is
viewed in this study as a prewriting activity
students engage in where they are linked with each
other through the Discussion Board to generate and
discuss topic ideas before drafting their essays.
The research questions (RQ) are as follows:
RQ1:
How effective is the use of the Discussion Board
in generating ideas for writing academic essays?
RQ1a: How much of what was discussed online was reflected in
the essay?
RQ1b: How much of the essay was not part of the online
discussion?
RQ1c: In terms of language use, what lexical and/or syntactic
similarities or differences were evident in the
online forum and the written essay?
RQ2:
What attitudes/perceptions do the teacher and
students have toward the collaborative online
invention process?
RQ2a: (for teacher and students) What did the teacher and
students think of the process? Would they prefer
using the same invention strategy in future
essays? Why or why not?
RQ2b: (for teacher) How did the teacher assess the nature of
this strategy in terms of student participation?
Did she think the activity triggered fruitful
class discussions (or otherwise)? Why or why not?
RQ2c: (for teacher) If the teacher were to modify this
collaborative online invention activity, how would
she do it? What reasons would she have for her
choice of modification?
RQ2d: (for students) How many of the ideas discussed online
did students think were tapped into their writing
and/or how many of the ideas they have in writing
were actually sparked by the online dialogue?
RQ2e: (for students) How did students come up with ideas that
were not discussed online?
RQ2f: (for students) Were there any technical terms/words,
phrases, or clauses that were picked up online and
used in the essay?
Method
This study aims to provide a description of the asynchronous mode of
invention based on the textual findings of the
first research question and teacher-student
interviews of the second. The first-year writing
class of a mid-western state university was
selected according to scheduling availability,
computer lab access, and consent of the course
instructor. Students were already exposed to
in-class Discussion Board activities prior to the
investigation, so assigning them to engage in two
Discussion Board invention sessions before
drafting a required research-based essay was not
difficult. The data (online transcripts, rough
drafts, and teacher-student interviews) were
collected over a five-week period, taking place
between the time when students started generating
topics online for their argumentative
research-based essay until the last
student-interview was done. Students primarily
explored general ideas for their essays (possible
essay topics, theses, main points and supporting
details, counterarguments, and so on) in groups
with around three to four students per group on
the first Discussion Board invention session.
After a week, they continued discussing their
essay plans as well as possible textual support
within the same groups on the second session.
Figure 1 shows the assigned group task for a
typical collaborative online invention session.
Instruction: Explore with your peers and provide
feedback/suggestions on the following points:
1) potential essay topics and thesis
statements
2) possible main ideas/arguments and
supporting details
3) possible opposing views and refutations
4) possible sources
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Figure 1. Assigned group task for a typical
collaborative online invention session
The instructor who agreed to participate was very
comfortable with technology, having infused
Discussion Board forums in her writing classes for
several years before this study began. Without a
vested interest in the approach, the possibility
of a teacher effect was thus minimized. Twenty-two
students from the class were expected, which is
the maximum number of students typically enrolled
in first-year writing, to agree to participate.
After inviting student participants during my
classroom visit at the beginning of the semester,
only 10 student online transcripts and
research-based essay rough drafts were randomly
selected and analyzed; from these subjects, only
three were interviewed (see Table 1). The random
selection process did not consider the
participants’ gender, technological experience, or
socio-economic status. In compliance with the
Human Subjects Review Board regulation, identities
of the participants were never revealed.
Identification letters for students were used
instead in order to eliminate sexual and racial
biases. The instructor was referred to simply as
“teacher.”
Table 1. Participants by group
Group Participants
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1
Students
K, L, M
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2 Students N, O*, P,
Q* |
3 Students R*, S, T |
* Students interviewed
This study followed a descriptive research design
to examine the relationship between the
collaborative online invention strategy and
student academic writing. Unlike experimental
studies, no control groups were created and no
treatments were given (Lauer & Asher, 1988).
Patterns from online discussion transcripts,
student rough drafts, and teacher-student
interviews were identified and retained through
classification and coding according to the
principles of Strauss & Corbin (1998), with a
“microanalysis” approach that resemble “very
careful, often minute examination and
interpretation of data” (p. 58).
Analysis of Online Transcript
(Discussion Board) |
Analysis of Written Essay
(Rough Draft) |
·
Potential essay topic, purpose, and thesis
statement
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·
Clarity of thesis statement |
·
Main ideas and supporting details
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·
Formation of logical argument
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·
Textual Support
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·
Citation and synthesis* of academic sources |
·
Opposing views and refutations |
·
Integration of counterargument
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Finally,
the analytical procedure mentioned above was
transformed into the following steps to
approximate grounded theory method:
1)
Read and mark the subject-participants’ dialogues
found in online transcripts.
2)
Read and mark the essay parts in their drafts based
on four categories – (a) topic, purpose, thesis
statement; (b) main ideas and supporting details;
(c) source citation and synthesis; (d)
counterarguments. Note any rhetorically
significant language use as well.
3)
Reread and analyze online transcripts and mark
relevant dialogues pertaining to four essay
categories. Also note subject-participants’
contribution to group discussions.
4)
Code and analyze both texts (online and rough
drafts). Reread and immediately repeat coding
and/or analysis if a significant pattern emerged.
5)
Reread essay drafts to note any (or lack of)
transfer of four essay categories: What was found
in both texts (online and essay drafts) and what
was found only in one text? Also, compare both
texts to identify rhetorically significant
language use.
6)
Code and analyze teacher and student interviews.
Repeat coding and/or analysis if any significant
pattern emerged. Finally, compare and contrast
both teacher and student interview data.
7)
Compare and contrast analyses of online transcript
and essay draft data with interview data. Use
interview data to supplement or enrich textual
data.
8)
Arrange textual data and interview data analyses
coherently. Point out significant observations and
patterns, including the quantity of transfer of
each category and language use as well as
supplementary patterns based on the interview.
Table 3. Descriptive Summary
Research Questions |
Essay Categories
(Need longer invention sessions for the LAST TWO essay categories;
Positive language transformations in ALL essay categories) |
Discussion Board
|
Research Question 1:
How effective is the use of the Discussion Board in generating ideas for writing academic essays?
(Seems to encourage ‘Socialization’, ‘Meaningful Conversations’, ‘Critical Reflection’) |
#1: Essay Topic, Purpose, and Thesis Statement
(successful transfer) |
(+) 5 essays with transfer, 3 essays with partial transfer, 2 essays without transfer |
#2: Main Ideas and Supporting Details
(average transfer) |
(+) rough drafts indicate multiple modifications of main ideas and supporting details with 4 essays with complete transfer,
5 essays with either modified, added, or reduced ideas, 1 essay without transfer |
#3: Textual Support or Source Synthesis
(minimal transfer)
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(-) 2 essays with complete transfer, 8 essays without transfer
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#4: Opposing Views and Refutations or Counter-arguments
(very minimal transfer) |
(-) 2 essays with partial transfer, 8 essays without transfer
(however, online transcripts indicate traces of meaningful interaction and critical reflection on counter-arguments with 8 students with online posts on counter-arguments)
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Research Question 2:
What attitudes / perceptions do the teacher and students have toward the collaborative online invention process?
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(+) the teacher and students affirm the Discussion Board’s capacity to sustain focused interactions and critical reflection within an egalitarian environment; invention forum most preferred by the teacher
(-) according to one student, responses are delayed in the Discussion Board; the teacher recognizes the time lag but counter-argues that students are more fully engaged in reading, responding, and reflecting on online posts |
Non-Transference of Ideas from Online to Print