Statement of the Problem
                              
                              
                              College students enrolled in composition courses
                              are expected to develop their academic writing
                              skills in order to survive in the university. One
                              of the first steps to meet this expectation is by
                              applying innovative pedagogical practices in the
                              process of discovery and invention. In this
                              regard, the promise of computer-mediated
                              communication (CMC) to facilitate student exchange
                              becomes an enabling practice (Blythe, 2003;
                              Yancey, 2003). Because the process of
                              collaborative online invention or prewriting is a
                              social act no longer reminiscent of the
                              Platonic/solitary view, it is necessary to examine
                              the usability of CMC as a social composing tool.
                              
                              
                              Toward this goal, this study closely re-examines
                              the effects of one of the most commonly used CMC
                              invention strategies in current composition
                              classrooms, the Discussion feature of Blackboard,
                              on an argumentative research-based essay
                              requirement. One computer-mediated first-year
                              writing class in an average-sized mid-western
                              university used asynchronous Discussion Board for
                              collaborative invention in the spring of 2007. The
                              transfer of invention ideas to student essays,
                              along with the attitudes and perceptions of the
                              teacher and students toward this online activity,
                              was analyzed and described to strengthen the
                              pedagogical implications of this type of
                              asynchronous technology among other CMC platforms
                              in composition studies. Though short-term
                              investigations on a limited setting such as this
                              may not yield generalizable results, this inquiry
                              can definitely contribute to understanding how
                              technology impacts the writing classroom.
                              Literature Survey
                              
                              
                              The field of computers and writing acknowledges
                              the special features of online communication to
                              link learners collaboratively and help them
                              develop their academic communication skills. In
                              this case, online invention creates a space where
                              ideas are formed, meanings are negotiated,
                              questions are asked, and language forms are
                              produced uninhibitedly, far removed from any
                              traditional, teacher-centered approach to
                              instruction. In fact, a growing number of research
                              studies have already identified its positive
                              effects on student learning (e.g. Barton, 2005;
                              Fife, 2008; Hewett, 2006; Paulus, 2007).  The use
                              of Blackboard content-management tools has become
                              ubiquitous in the academic landscape and, with the
                              current boom of Web 2.0 and other interactive
                              media learning tools that brought practitioners to
                              greater lengths of classroom experimentation, many
                              writing teachers seem to have forgotten their
                              primary responsibility of validating the influence
                              of such tools on the quality of student writing.
                              
                              
                              Revisiting the Process of Invention and
                              Collaborative Learning
                              
                              
                              In order to provide opportunities for student
                              writers to develop academic language proficiency,
                              one should re-consider the role of invention in
                              the writing process. The process of invention
                              ideally allows students to come up with clear
                              essay topics and supporting details, wrestle and
                              make connections between academic texts, think and
                              communicate within the parameters of academic
                              jargon, and so forth. Student writers find
                              themselves moving freely between the personal and
                              the academic praxis before the drafting process.
                              Lauer (2004) argues that “All writers face the
                              problem of finding subjects to write about and of
                              developing these subjects” (p. 1). The idea that
                              the writer undergoes preliminary stages could be
                              traced back to cognitive psychology (Barab &
                              Duffy, 2000). 
                              
                              
                              Consequently, since entering a social paradigmatic
                              approach (Paulus, 2007; Trupe, 2004), invention
                              becomes more privileged in the writing classroom
                              and the calls to study its practices gradually
                              abound. With the ubiquity of an interactive
                              classroom comes the success of the collaborative
                              method, proving that learning can go on without
                              the immediate presence of the teacher. Kelland
                              (2006) supports this by examining the development
                              of opportunities developed around constructivist
                              principles, including constructing knowledge,
                              practical participation, and collaborative work.
                              In fact, academic literacy skills such as
                              synthesizing sources, narrowing down topics,
                              focusing main ideas and supporting details, and so
                              forth become socially enhanced as students try to
                              construct knowledge. The idea that it is only
                              through interaction, dialogue, and negotiation of
                              meanings that lead to higher learning is tacit in
                              this respect. 
                              
                              
                              But collaborative invention is just one among many
                              other practices that broaden the experience of the
                              writer; therefore, it is not at all impossible to
                              draw something positive from solitary prewriting.
                              However, once solitary invention becomes the 
                              only activity for generating ideas, then the
                              prewriting experience also becomes limited.
                              The idea is to expand prewriting techniques that
                              would involve communication with others, if only
                              to make sure that the problem of inadequate
                              communicative skills within an academic discourse
                              community is mediated. 
                              
                              Embracing Computer-Mediated Communication
                              
                              
                              Current online practices, such as chat, blogs,
                              wikis, and so on, including the use of
                              asynchronous Discussion Board forums facilitate,
                              augment, and redefine group interaction as well as
                              promote the positive effects of collaborative
                              learning in academic discourse communities.
                              Translating solitary prewriting to a more social
                              online discussion provides more unique
                              opportunities for students to dabble in new
                              academic material as they interact with each other
                              before drafting their ideas on paper (Olaniran,
                              2005). The fact that more audience awareness may
                              result from such a cognitively demanding task is
                              extremely beneficial. Student writers are forced
                              to verbalize their thoughts and interact with one
                              another in online forums, allowing them to
                              practice/use the language of the academic
                              discourse community. Of course, the
                              non-threatening space of online communication
                              platforms enhances the advantages of collaborative
                              invention (Pennington, 2008; Rickly, 2004). 
                              
                              
                              
                              Hand & Prain (2002) argue that “any effective
                              writing-to-learn task requires a rich learning
                              environment where students are provided with
                              sufficient motivation, procedural guidance, and
                              expert and on-going peer feedback” (p. 753). As
                              noted earlier, engaging students in
                              computer-mediated invention supports such an
                              environment since the virtual activity itself
                              exhibits three collaborative characteristics:
                              motivation, guidance, and feedback. Anderson
                              (2006) agrees that online interactions become
                              beneficial for student learning, given the social
                              nature of the activity. But is this really the
                              case for all first-year writing students?
                              Does online invention trigger the development of
                              ideas transferable to student academic writing?
                              
                              Research Questions
                              
                              
                              Apparently, more investigations on dialogic
                              artifact analysis are still needed in the field of
                              composition studies. Such examination will
                              strengthen the correlation between the use of CMC
                              and the quality of the written product, so that
                              composition teachers will be able to (1)
                              understand the value of distinct platforms as a
                              composing tool, and (2) choose an invention
                              strategy that renders purposeful collaborative
                              online activities within a situated context.
                              
                              
                              
                              Because the use of the Discussion Board, an online
                              threaded content-management tool, is still one of
                              the most common collaborative online invention
                              forums, investigating its impact on first-year
                              student writing based on (1) the transfer of ideas
                              from online to print, and (2) the attitudes and
                              perceptions of the teacher and students toward the
                              process is beneficial for composition teachers.
                              The term “collaborative online invention” is
                              viewed in this study as a prewriting activity
                              students engage in where they are linked with each
                              other through the Discussion Board to generate and
                              discuss topic ideas before drafting their essays.
                              The research questions (RQ) are as follows:
                              
                               
                              
                              
                              RQ1:
                              How effective is the use of the Discussion Board
                              in generating ideas for writing academic essays?
                              
                              RQ1a: How much of what was discussed online was reflected in
                              the essay?
                              
                              RQ1b: How much of the essay was not part of the online
                              discussion?
                              
                              RQ1c: In terms of language use, what lexical and/or syntactic
                              similarities or differences were evident in the
                              online forum and the written essay? 
                              
                              
                              RQ2:
                              What attitudes/perceptions do the teacher and
                              students have toward the collaborative online
                              invention process?
                              
                              RQ2a: (for teacher and students) What did the teacher and
                              students think of the process? Would they prefer
                              using the same invention strategy in future
                              essays? Why or why not?
                              
                              RQ2b: (for teacher) How did the teacher assess the nature of
                              this strategy in terms of student participation?
                              Did she think the activity triggered fruitful
                              class discussions (or otherwise)? Why or why not?
                              
                              RQ2c: (for teacher) If the teacher were to modify this
                              collaborative online invention activity, how would
                              she do it? What reasons would she have for her
                              choice of modification?
                              
                              RQ2d: (for students) How many of the ideas discussed online
                              did students think were tapped into their writing
                              and/or how many of the ideas they have in writing
                              were actually sparked by the online dialogue?
                              
                              RQ2e: (for students) How did students come up with ideas that
                              were not discussed online?
                              
                              RQ2f: (for students) Were there any technical terms/words,
                              phrases, or clauses that were picked up online and
                              used in the essay?
                              
                              Method
                              
                              This study aims to provide a description of the asynchronous mode of
                              invention based on the textual findings of the
                              first research question and teacher-student
                              interviews of the second. The first-year writing
                              class of a mid-western state university was
                              selected according to scheduling availability,
                              computer lab access, and consent of the course
                              instructor. Students were already exposed to
                              in-class Discussion Board activities prior to the
                              investigation, so assigning them to engage in two
                              Discussion Board invention sessions before
                              drafting a required research-based essay was not
                              difficult. The data (online transcripts, rough
                              drafts, and teacher-student interviews) were
                              collected over a five-week period, taking place
                              between the time when students started generating
                              topics online for their argumentative
                              research-based essay until the last
                              student-interview was done. Students primarily
                              explored general ideas for their essays (possible
                              essay topics, theses, main points and supporting
                              details, counterarguments, and so on) in groups
                              with around three to four students per group on
                              the first Discussion Board invention session.
                              After a week, they continued discussing their
                              essay plans as well as possible textual support
                              within the same groups on the second session.
                              Figure 1 shows the assigned group task for a
                              typical collaborative online invention session.
 
                              
                                
                                  | 
                                  Instruction:  Explore with your peers and provide
                                  feedback/suggestions on the following points:
 1) potential essay topics and thesis
                                  statements
 2) possible main ideas/arguments and
                                  supporting details
 3) possible opposing views and refutations
 4) possible sources
 
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                                 Figure 1.  Assigned group task for a typical
                              collaborative online invention session
                              
                              
                              
                              The instructor who agreed to participate was very
                              comfortable with technology, having infused
                              Discussion Board forums in her writing classes for
                              several years before this study began. Without a
                              vested interest in the approach, the possibility
                              of a teacher effect was thus minimized. Twenty-two
                              students from the class were expected, which is
                              the maximum number of students typically enrolled
                              in first-year writing, to agree to participate.
                              After inviting student participants during my
                              classroom visit at the beginning of the semester,
                              only 10 student online transcripts and
                              research-based essay rough drafts were randomly
                              selected and analyzed; from these subjects, only
                              three were interviewed (see Table 1). The random
                              selection process did not consider the
                              participants’ gender, technological experience, or
                              socio-economic status. In compliance with the
                              Human Subjects Review Board regulation, identities
                              of the participants were never revealed.
                              Identification letters for students were used
                              instead in order to eliminate sexual and racial
                              biases. The instructor was referred to simply as
                              “teacher.” 
                              
                                
                              Table 1.   Participants by group
                              
                                
                                  | 
                                  Group                    Participants
                                    | 
                                
                                  |                                    1   
                                                       Students
                                  K, L, M | 
                                
                                  | 
                                   2                        Students N, O*, P,
                                  Q* | 
                                
                                  | 
                                   3                        Students R*, S, T | 
                              
                              
                               
                              * Students interviewed
                              
                               
                              
                              
                              This study followed a descriptive research design
                              to examine the relationship between the
                              collaborative online invention strategy and
                              student academic writing. Unlike experimental
                              studies, no control groups were created and no
                              treatments were given (Lauer & Asher, 1988).
                              Patterns from online discussion transcripts,
                              student rough drafts, and teacher-student
                              interviews were identified and retained through
                              classification and coding according to the
                              principles of Strauss & Corbin (1998), with a
                              “microanalysis” approach that resemble “very
                              careful, often minute examination and
                              interpretation of data” (p. 58). 
 
                              
                              
                              
                              
                                
                                  | 
                                  Analysis of Online Transcript  
                                  (Discussion Board) | 
                                  Analysis of Written Essay  
                                  (Rough Draft) | 
                                
                                  | 
                                  
                                  ·       
                                  
                                  
                                  Potential essay topic, purpose, and thesis 
                                  statement                   
                                  
                                                                   | 
                                  
                                  ·       
                                  
                                  
                                  Clarity of thesis statement | 
                                
                                  | 
                                  
                                  ·       
                                  
                                  
                                  Main ideas and supporting details           
                                   | 
                                  
                                  ·       
                                  
                                  
                                  Formation of logical argument  
                                  
                                    | 
                                
                                  | 
                                  
                                  ·       
                                  
                                  
                                  Textual Support
 
 | 
                                  
                                  ·       
                                  
                                  
                                  Citation and synthesis* of academic sources | 
                                
                                  | 
                                  
                                  ·       
                                  
                                  
                                  Opposing views and refutations | 
                                  
                                  ·       
                                  
                                  
                                  Integration of counterargument 
                                  
                                    | 
                              
                              
                              
                              
                              
                              
                              
                              
                              
                              
                              
                              
                              
                              
                              
                              
                              
                              Finally,
                              the analytical procedure mentioned above was
                              transformed into the following steps to
                              approximate grounded theory method:
                              
                              
                              1)    
                              
                              Read and mark the subject-participants’ dialogues
                              found in online transcripts.
                              
                              
                              2)    
                              
                              Read and mark the essay parts in their drafts based
                              on four categories – (a) topic, purpose, thesis
                              statement; (b) main ideas and supporting details;
                              (c) source citation and synthesis; (d)
                              counterarguments. Note any rhetorically
                              significant language use as well.
                              
                              
                              3)    
                              
                              Reread and analyze online transcripts and mark
                              relevant dialogues pertaining to four essay
                              categories. Also note subject-participants’
                              contribution to group discussions.
                              
                              
                              4)    
                              
                              Code and analyze both texts (online and rough
                              drafts). Reread and immediately repeat coding
                              and/or analysis if a significant pattern emerged.
                              
                              
                              5)    
                              
                              Reread essay drafts to note any (or lack of)
                              transfer of four essay categories: What was found
                              in both texts (online and essay drafts) and what
                              was found only in one text? Also, compare both
                              texts to identify rhetorically significant
                              language use. 
                              
                              
                              6)    
                              
                              Code and analyze teacher and student interviews.
                              Repeat coding and/or analysis if any significant
                              pattern emerged. Finally, compare and contrast
                              both teacher and student interview data.
                              
                              
                              7)    
                              
                              Compare and contrast analyses of online transcript
                              and essay draft data with interview data. Use
                              interview data to supplement or enrich textual
                              data.
                              
                              
                              8)    
                              
                              Arrange textual data and interview data analyses
                              coherently. Point out significant observations and
                              patterns, including the quantity of transfer of
                              each category and language use as well as
                              supplementary patterns based on the interview.
                              
                              
                              Table 3.   Descriptive Summary
                              
                                
                                  |   Research Questions |   Essay Categories  (Need longer invention sessions for the LAST TWO essay categories;  Positive language transformations in ALL essay categories) |   Discussion Board    | 
                                
                                  |   Research Question 1: 
 How effective is the use of the Discussion Board in generating ideas for writing academic essays?
      (Seems to encourage ‘Socialization’, ‘Meaningful Conversations’, ‘Critical Reflection’) |  #1: Essay Topic, Purpose, and Thesis Statement  (successful transfer) |   (+) 5 essays with transfer, 3 essays with partial transfer, 2 essays without transfer | 
                                
                                  |  #2: Main Ideas and Supporting Details  (average transfer) |   (+) rough drafts indicate multiple modifications of main ideas and supporting details with 4 essays with complete transfer,   5 essays with either modified, added, or reduced ideas, 1 essay without transfer | 
                                
                                  |  #3: Textual Support or Source Synthesis  (minimal transfer)    |   (-) 2 essays with complete transfer, 8 essays without transfer    | 
                                
                                  |  #4: Opposing Views and Refutations or Counter-arguments  (very minimal transfer) |   (-)   2 essays with partial transfer, 8 essays without transfer  (however, online transcripts indicate traces of meaningful interaction and critical reflection on counter-arguments with 8 students with online posts on counter-arguments)    | 
                                
                                  |   Research Question 2:     What attitudes / perceptions do the teacher and students have toward the collaborative online invention process? |  |   (+) the teacher and students affirm the Discussion Board’s capacity to sustain focused interactions and critical reflection within an egalitarian environment; invention forum most preferred by the teacher      (-)   according to one student, responses are delayed in the Discussion Board; the teacher recognizes the time lag but counter-argues that students are more fully engaged in reading, responding, and reflecting on online posts | 
                              
                              
                              
                              
                              
                              
                              
                              
                              
                              
                              Non-Transference of Ideas from Online to Print